1. Experience is commonplace, not profound
Many view sitting alone phone-free in cafes as ordinary, especially outside the US or for non-techbros.
"d--b: This is a highly romanticized view imo... I sit alone in cafes all the time... I don’t understand the post at all."
"soared: This reminds me of the “techbro discovers very common x thing” meme."
"tomca32: As a European living in the US this reads “American discovers sitting down with a cup of coffee instead of taking it outside”."
2. Criticism of writing style
The breathless, LinkedIn/TED-talk tone and title parody annoy readers.
"mrbukkake: It's the linkedin writing style, the idea is to make a bland anecdote with some vapid 'insights' sound interesting by making it all enthusiastic and breathless like a TED talk."
"isoprophlex: The writing style... quickly loses it's luster."
"nicbou: That writing style is like nails on a chalkboard to me."
3. Benefits of unplugging from phones
Support for leaving devices behind to embrace thoughts, despite addiction and practical hurdles.
"qweiopqweiop: When you're so addicted to checking at your phone (like me and many others), it does feel weird to sit and not look at it."
"unsungNovelty: Too many negative comments here. This is just someone discovering something new and sharing it very excitedly."
"delis-thumbs-7e: We all should learn how to be without electronics for every now and then, accompanied only our thoughts. It is good for the soul."